2007年5月8日

Assignment 2(1st edition): Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory

In all the universities, there have two parts in students about the place they leave: living at home and living in the dormitory. Both of two kinds of students have the feeling about the lifestyle and feel that living at home or in the dormitory is better. What's the difference between them? First, compare to the lifestyle, living in the dormitory can have more free time to let students do what they want every time. Maybe we can go shopping after the last class, go to KTV with friends in the weekend. Everything can decide by us! For living at home, it can not have more free time because of parents. Parents usually worried about their children and limit there free time. Maybe parents want you to study in every evening or the weekend. However, the lifestyle living at home is more normal than living in the dormitory. If someone living in the dormitory, he or she may spend the midnight to play computer games or watch the movies and harm his or her health. Second, compare to the cost, living in the dormitory must have to pay more money in the lives, just like the dorm rate, water rate, meal cost…and so on. For some people which is poor, it is a burden. The students living at home have no problem about these costs. Parents prepare the lunch and dinner, all the cost about lives, and a room for us. Therefore, we don't have to worry about that if we living at home. Third, compare to the relationship, living in the dormitory can have more time to chat and talk about the homework with classmates. Therefore, the students living in the dormitory have better relationship with classmates than living at home.

3 則留言:

Alicita 提到...

I think you have several points of comparison, maybe you can organize them in two paragrapath by points and your assignment will be more clear ^^

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Jenny121 提到...

Enjoy to read your paragraph, and there are some suggestion for you.

First, write down the conclusion and you can repeat the main idea or key points for your conclusion.

Second, there are three points that you wrote: lifestyle(more free time), cost and relationship, maybe you can organize those points then make you topic sentence more clear.

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Jenny121 提到...

不好意思,也可以麻煩你幫我留下你的意見在我的Assignment2_(1),因為我目前只有一個意見,謝謝你囉!