Computer is interesting, and I think it is the main reason to let me major in computer science. When I was a 5-year child, There were some computer at home, and they were my older brother’s. I usually saw what my brother what he did in front of computer. Therefore, I had an impression about computer. After I entered the junior high school, I had my own computer to use. Therefore, I experienced the PC games, the Internet, the HTML, the online-game……etc., and I had lots of interest in computer. Besides, I have seen lots of fashionable homepage. I tried to make my own homepage when I studying in the junior high school, but I just make a simple page. I want to learn more technique. Finally, the Internet is not safe. Because of hackers and electric viruses, I lose my data in the online-game and have to install my computer again. Because of this appearance, I also want to major in network. I want to learn the way to convey data in the network and protect the data not to be intercept.
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your structure of essay is very clearly,but,maybe write a summary in the end,like『this is ....about why I choose the major.
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Your upper paragraph is good,but ".. fashionable homepage. I tried to make my " is a little bit incoherence.
In addition, last part of paragraph is out of topic(.~_~|
I hope my suggest is helpful to you.
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